New Eden (poemish thing)

Dearly Beloved,
We gather here today to bid farewell
To the cause of broken hearts
And shattered dreams.

Now, if you would be so kind
As to open up your mind,
You'll see your cities and your streets
Are broken and replete
With every kind of thief,
Mongrel, stranger, and grief.
Your loss of comprehension,
I think it's safe to mention,
Will only bring forth mutiny,
Lies and dark descention.

But, if you care to join me
In my journey through lost ages;
Take from every era
Great ideas from burnt pages;
Chain the tides that bind us,
And break from our white marble cages...
Meet me in New Eden.
Bring a candle.
Lose your rages.

holy damn...you wrote this?

Shit, mark!

I had a kid this brilliant?

Quote :

Your loss of comprehension,
I think it's safe to mention,
Will only bring forth mutiny,
Lies and dark descention.

That's my favorite part. Just wow.

haha thankies guys! and this was at 2 in the morning, and originally i was just gonna make the first part my siggy

wow mark, thats super good!

well duh mom...i mean it IS me

XD true true haha

its amawesom (amazing and awesome =])

*struggles to pronounce amawesom(e)* gotta llove combo words

wwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww
WE HAVE A POET IN THE FAMILIA!!!!

i cant be the only one

i have like 2 good poems

yay abbey!

i can only write when inspiration hits

i cant write

i write at the most random times

i write when i feel like it
but my said things that i write, well ellie thinks they are really good
but i dont think so
but we inherite it from our mother ELLIENOR!
who is an AWESOME writer

ellienor haha

me and her need to write that suicide sleep story about mikey soon

did you? no. you did not.

I actually did write it.

WHOOPEEE